Comments for Chaotic Spirit http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com Whatever I say it's about! Mon, 28 Dec 2009 17:53:29 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Almost true fiction: The Red Lady – Flash Friday #5 by nightskystargaz http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/12/25/almost-true-fiction-the-red-lady-flash-friday-5/#comment-55 nightskystargaz Mon, 28 Dec 2009 17:53:29 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/?p=202#comment-55 Thanks Lisa, Now you have to finish "The Red Lady" Thanks, Tom Thanks Lisa,

Now you have to finish “The Red Lady”

Thanks,

Tom

]]> Comment on Almost true fiction: The Red Lady – Flash Friday #5 by lolagirl10 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/12/25/almost-true-fiction-the-red-lady-flash-friday-5/#comment-53 lolagirl10 Fri, 25 Dec 2009 19:16:19 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/?p=202#comment-53 Hehe - no actually it wasn't planned at all, I just went with the flow. After I had got stuck at the first part - I figured, why can't I write about a writer? who gets stuck the same as I do :) Thanks for commenting! Hehe – no actually it wasn’t planned at all, I just went with the flow. After I had got stuck at the first part – I figured, why can’t I write about a writer? who gets stuck the same as I do :) Thanks for commenting!

]]> Comment on Almost true fiction: The Red Lady – Flash Friday #5 by pittsburghflashfictiongazette http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/12/25/almost-true-fiction-the-red-lady-flash-friday-5/#comment-52 pittsburghflashfictiongazette Fri, 25 Dec 2009 18:09:05 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/?p=202#comment-52 You may not have gotten the story you wanted but you got the story you needed; or did you plan it this way all the time? I was hooked from the first paragraph until the last. Well done. You may not have gotten the story you wanted but you got the story you needed; or did you plan it this way all the time? I was hooked from the first paragraph until the last. Well done.

]]> Comment on Prologue – #FlashFriday 4 by JohnsonB http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/12/18/prologue-flashfriday-4/#comment-50 JohnsonB Sat, 19 Dec 2009 04:25:46 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/?p=198#comment-50 hey, good post and i also like your page layout too. Bookmarked your site and will stop by again hey, good post and i also like your page layout too. Bookmarked your site and will stop by again

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by lolagirl10 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-47 lolagirl10 Sat, 17 Oct 2009 12:43:28 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-47 Essex? Oh Cool! I'm always happy to meet other UK peeps! Thanks for taking the time to read and repspond :) Essex? Oh Cool! I’m always happy to meet other UK peeps! Thanks for taking the time to read and repspond :)

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by Chance http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-46 Chance Sat, 17 Oct 2009 11:11:10 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-46 sigh - when I broke down on the M25 this year, I got a beer bellied greasy essex wideboy. Know what I mean ! Liked it, I think quite a few (if not all!) blokes including myself have been guilty of hoping that the female secretly fancy us- though its probably the very few(if not one) that have ever got a note. good stuff and welcome to friday flash sigh – when I broke down on the M25 this year, I got a beer bellied greasy essex wideboy. Know what I mean !

Liked it, I think quite a few (if not all!) blokes including myself have been guilty of hoping that the female secretly fancy us- though its probably the very few(if not one) that have ever got a note.

good stuff and welcome to friday flash

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by lolagirl10 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-45 lolagirl10 Fri, 16 Oct 2009 20:10:41 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-45 Hey thank you for the feedback :) I don't recognise your name, what is your twitter ID? Hey thank you for the feedback :) I don’t recognise your name, what is your twitter ID?

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by lolagirl10 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-44 lolagirl10 Fri, 16 Oct 2009 19:25:00 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-44 Well, I thought about that - but I think the not knowing is in keeping with the story idea, it's to make you think and lets you use your own perspective. I put it together in two days - now that really isn't bad for me! Especially as it is also my first completed story, which makes it extra special :) Thanks very much for responding, now I'm off to track down some #FlashFriday stories to read too :) Well, I thought about that – but I think the not knowing is in keeping with the story idea, it’s to make you think and lets you use your own perspective.

I put it together in two days – now that really isn’t bad for me! Especially as it is also my first completed story, which makes it extra special :)

Thanks very much for responding, now I’m off to track down some #FlashFriday stories to read too :)

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by Carrie Cleaver http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-42 Carrie Cleaver Fri, 16 Oct 2009 14:52:59 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-42 First impression and it distracted me, was that I couldn't determine the gender of the speaker. Perhaps a name or a gender-specific characteristic would be helpful to your reader. That being said, this is a great debut. It has great flow, is a little educational, (references to parts of cars in the UK) and has a heartwarming yet smirkable ending. I'm glad you let loose this little gem. Welcome to #Fridayflash! Carrie First impression and it distracted me, was that I couldn’t determine the gender of the speaker. Perhaps a name or a gender-specific characteristic would be helpful to your reader.

That being said, this is a great debut. It has great flow, is a little educational, (references to parts of cars in the UK) and has a heartwarming yet smirkable ending. I’m glad you let loose this little gem. Welcome to #Fridayflash!

Carrie

]]> Comment on Friday Flash! by Laura Eno http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-40 Laura Eno Fri, 16 Oct 2009 00:54:26 +0000 http://lolagirl10.wordpress.com/2009/10/15/friday-flash/#comment-40 Well, at least he gets a chance! Welcome to #fridayflash. Well, at least he gets a chance! Welcome to #fridayflash.

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